2014年12月3日星期三

Project 4 - Step 1

Project 4 – Step 1

Trait: A strong sense of morality.
l   Positive: Obviously, owning a clear view of right and wrong is a good thing. Be willing to offering help and taking actions when seeing something unfair happens. Besides, it is good to protect justice of society and improve personal abilities.
l   Negative: A person who has a strong sense of morality may easily use his/her own evaluation criterion to judge things. When they saw something unfair happens, they may take extreme actions to punish others.

Imagine a crime:
It was a serial murder (killing). I got information from BBS (Bulletin Board System) about something unfair or unfortunate experience people suffered, I used my own way to punish bad guys to uphold justice (kill bad people).

Biased article:
QAngel or DevilJustice or Injustice

On December 3rd, a serial criminal who killed three people was arrested in Wenzhou. Her name is Mandy Lin. Faced with an extremely evil criminal, a large amount of citizen in Wenzhou showed their sympathy towards her rather than anathematic. It sounds really strange. There must be something hiding it.
The first person she killed was an incompetent husband. He often gambled, drunk, do domestic violence to his wife and kid. His wife shared her tragic experience on BBS receiving much comfort from other people, including Mandy. She had an extremely clear view of right and wrong and hated all the unfair and unfortunate.
Mandy decided to help the wife to handle this unfortunate. After talking with the wife and knew about some specific information about her bad husband, Mandy made a precision plan to kill this people. The husband went to pubs with a very high frequency. The pub space was limited; the environment was crowded and disordered; the husband was drunk. Mandy got closed to him, pretended to talked with him and then, killed him with a knife; of course, she wore gloves to hide fingerprint.
“He is not my husband, not my baby’s father. He is a ‘vampire’. He damns!” The wife said hatred.
The rest dead people’s personal circumstances were similar with the bad husband. The one was a habitual theft; another one was a robber. Mandy was good at taking advantage of their personal characteristics to punish them. She hated some police’s low efficiency of arresting bad guys and some leaders’ corruption. Maybe the social atmosphere should be re-political. Making public disappointed again and again will be the worst thing we all never want to see.
She is an angel or devil? The punishment she gave was justice or injustice? Actually, many people said: ”Yes, of course she is right.” However, it comes out another question: where the power of law embodied in?




2 条评论:

  1. 1) What voice is this written in?
    Some people don't adopt to the moral standards, but the police has low ability, so she killed the people who don't adopt to the moral standards.
    2) What is the quality/trait that this person identifies about herself/himself? How could this be improved?
    A strong sense of morality. Education.
    3) What is the crime that this person imagines? How could this be improved?
    Kill the people who is without moral standards.
    4) Does the essay justify/rationalize why they committed this crime?
    Yes.
    5) How is the character of the article different from the actual writer?
    Actually, she's not an abnormal person.She won't do such crazy things if she meets the same situation.
    6) What is your impression of the character?
    Abnormal, crazy, can't understand.

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  2. 1. The law can't restrain some people and there are some person will restrain them.
    2.A strong sense of morality. Calm.
    3.Kill the people who law can't restrain them.
    4.yes
    5.She is warm herat but she is not crazy,
    6. Crazy

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